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Once Was Wanted Now Cast Aside by *SixU:iconSixU:



Once was wanted, now cast aside



Contact made, a spark ignited

Conversation and interest excited

Two souls converging into one

his invisible chains came undone



Handsome and coy, charming was he,

but contradictions and denial soon bled free.



compliments made under whispered breath,

oblivious to the impending death,

Sore lips, bodies intertwined and contorted,

yearning feelings soon to be distorted.



Parted now, distant, cold.

Shame and guilt has all but been sold,

You never said any of this, I was never told.

If I knew, If I had known

I would have left it well alone.



You said you liked me, and I believed,

All the while, really deceived,

I do not know, with whom I talk to now.

Only that I miss him so.



You feel ashamed and I confused,

You felt liberated, I feel used,

There's little point now, in sticking around,

Now both of us are completely bemused,

As society begins to surround.



I cannot be your friend as you shunned me away,

A Jekyll and Hyde you consistently portray,



You don the mask and chains again.



I do feel for you, but "au revoir"

You cannot accept who you really are.



March 7th 2008
©2008 *SixU
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I wrote this piece of poetry many weeks ago and I never really planned to release it here, I've since come to terms with the subject matter and now wanted to perhaps share my experience in the form of poetry. I'm not a great poet, nor do I claim to be, I very rarely write, unless I absolutely feel the need to.

For me, using the pen allows me to vent feelings more than I'm capable of actually saying.

Safe to say this piece of poetry concerns an experience I had with a guy several weeks ago, which went all wrong and ended up being quite hurtful. I did write a few more, but I haven't really decided to add them here as they're rather private.

This piece of music really corresponds to my feelings about the poem and the entire thing, so if possible, do read it while listening to this composition:

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*SixU:iconSixU: May 26, 2008, 6:27:41 PM
Thanks for the fav, matey. It's good to know you liked it enough to do that. :)

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